Post by Erosaf on Aug 17, 2010 11:46:43 GMT 1
Okay in a fantasy novel I am starting at the moment, there is an ancient prophecy that needs to be forfilled. It's written by an elf who is bonded to a very wise dragon. So there needs to be the elegance of the elf, but the bluntness of the dragon... Can anyone help to refine this even more than I have already??
Prophecy
Hark hear the dragons roar,
a dying ember of warriors flame,
a past era consumed by war.
A search will commence,
with the capture of darkness' spawn,
leaders will rise amore.
Young is the leader of the alliances,
the Wyvern Rider of a black drake,
From in the darkness he shall come,
Filled with the light of wanted peace.
Found they are,
time for rejoice,
for she will return,
for her forest crown.
Darkness will be abated,
a needed sacrifice,
shalt bring peace.
Hark hear the dragons roar,
a dying ember of warriors flame,
a past era consumed by war.
A search will commence,
with the capture of darkness' spawn,
leaders will rise amore.
Young is the leader of the alliances,
the Wyvern Rider of a black drake,
From in the darkness he shall come,
Filled with the light of wanted peace.
Found they are,
time for rejoice,
for she will return,
for her forest crown.
Darkness will be abated,
a needed sacrifice,
shalt bring peace.
