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Post by Michelle Mackenzie (Admin) on Dec 17, 2010 14:55:50 GMT 1
Deadline - This novel is struggling to keep its head out of the water. The story is too short at the moment.
So, I have no choice but to revise the plot once the novel is written. It needs more suspects, more evidence or details in some areas. I might have to do some research.
This is going to take a little longer than I thought it will.
I was hoping it wont take so long to write.
Maybe I can finish it as a novella, coz I would hate to bin this.[/size]
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Post by Erosaf on Dec 18, 2010 11:51:31 GMT 1
What Will happen, Will Happen - Needs serious editing...
Will I make Kayson be a vampire throught he whole book? Sure that will bring some issues with the sun into it for them to get past at events like the OlympicsShould I make the trial shorter?
And is my plot plot-bunny proof? Need to figure all these out...
Forces Collide - What so say....
Well it needs more plot and things... so there will be a few more brains picked into unlike before...
Needs more events
Needs slowing down
*scratches head* this is going to take a while
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Post by Michelle Mackenzie (Admin) on Jan 26, 2011 22:57:53 GMT 1
I am not sure what revision needs to be made yet on my next novel.
I have all ready revised my synopsis, as I had more ideas for my novel plot.
I have revised my synopsis twice all ready in the last couple of days.
I have added more murder and more questions for the Homicide Detective to ask the suspects...
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